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Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2022 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

This buildup is too good. Such a shame it’ll never get updated. 

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

It is amazing how much you can describe this and she hasn't even found him yet!  Brining up the "what if" was great.  You could probably do a chapter on each of the other girls if you wanted to!  But now finally we might actualyl get some interaction.  Wonderful story!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hmm. Things are getting very intense. Some deep scary thoughts here.

But at last Amanda is finally gonna walk in. I believe he will go inside her ass, won't he? And that's how the story ends, right? Or will he get shoved up there in the beginning of the chapter, and you describe the sensations in there? Lots of possibilities.

I think you said like 80 forms of the female ass. (I didn't count.)

What I'm wondering next is how he will end up in there. Will he hide on the bed, a chair, her underwear drawer? All these places can lead up to the ass.

Also, I want to know how he will go in there? Like, is he tied up, is he blindfolded, is he gagged so he is forced to breathe thru his nose? Will his head stick out? Will he go headfirst?

There are plenty of ways to do this. I just can't wait to find out which method you will choose. (Maybe multiple methods!)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Very deep.

Good Guesses, but I dont want to give away too many spoilers.

80 is a good guess.

Frozen on the chair.

No restraints, headfirst.

Just one way. Up.

Thanks!

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 23 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Maybe his morbid imaginings won't come true, at all.

Author's Response:

maybe... maybe not. it's up to the readers imagination.

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