[Report This]Date: March 26 2014 6:39 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
While I'm anxiously waiting, I'm also dreading the next chapter. Will it actually be the last chapter, or did you get carried away? This is an amazing story, I'd be a little disappointed to see it end. I really love this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hate to see it end too, I enjoyed writing it. Theres at least 2 left
[Report This]Date: February 11 2014 9:32 AM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
MUCH better!
:-)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2014 6:50 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
Whoa there! Only one more chapter! We need one chapter to describe his journey into the butthole and othen one when she feels satisfied and does a workout or something with him inside.
Anyway, what a chapter. "A picture means 1000 words." My goodness, a picture for this masterpiece would be the two girls talking with one point to their ass and the dude is in on the stool listening in the corner of the picture. My, what a scene!
I hope for an incredible finish!
Author's Response:
Sorry most likely just one more chapter. What you just described is in a another story I 'm working on but I have another story to post first before I post that story.
Thank you!!!!! That was just the review I was looking for! I tried to make it as detailed as possible and since you posted this review I added 300 more words to the story!
The ending is going to be what you expect and not what you expect at the same time. The ending you have in mind right now is in that other future story I mentioned above.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2014 5:33 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
I've never heard so many different names for that tiny little 'Barking Spider' that completely dominated this entire chapter...
Great Stuff! I hope Amanda doesn't suffocate him to quickly.... he does need to suffer.
Maybe Kacie will find some of those shrinking pills and slip one into her boyfriends beer while their out on Taco Night! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I just added 3 to 5 different names for that fuckchasm to the chapter and 300 more words!
Oh she's not going to suffocate him. he's going to be around for a long time to come.
If she can find one?
[Report This]Date: February 10 2014 2:21 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
Another gem! I just hope you get carried away and continue writing, I really like this story and I would rather not see it end so soon. Amazing work, I'll be wating anxiously for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I just added 300 more words so hopefully that will help you out in the meantime!
I hope I get carreid away too. these past 2 chapters were originally oging to be under 1000 words and now there close to 4,000! the problem is theres not much more to add to the story. I already have the ending in my head and its what your expecting and not what your expecting at the same time