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Reviewer: darkwolf2816 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 4:04 AM Title: The Devious Plotting and Planning

Hola

¿CUANDO terminará this historia?


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¿CUANDO SE Dio Una CONOCER Un Nuevo Capítulo?

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Devious Plotting and Planning

The amount of dialogue in this story is a bit higher than your usual works. then again considering we haven't reached the shrinking chapter yet this is to be expected.



Author's Response:

I'm trying to change my writing style for this story compared to my other unfinshed story that is 100% unaware.  I wanted to make this mainly a dilogue story and the girls talk about what they would do to him and they guys reaction and response

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 7:56 PM Title: The Devious Plotting and Planning

Really liked the plot so far. The whole shrinking pill, how that guy wants one and doesnt really care about the antidote/what could go wrong, totally being ignorant/stupid, is really great. Especially liked the idea of Kristy planing to never tell anyone about his maybe disapperance if that happens. Looking forward into this story now (:



Author's Response:

Thank You! I put a lot of thought into this one and i tried to cover any plot holes!

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