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Reviewer: Woodlenks788 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 15 2019 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

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Reviewer: Tunes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

I can't believe that this slipped past me!  It's an absolute riot.  Although I often cringed because I'm painfully guilty of many hackneyed giantess tropes, I love satire like this and thought it was very well done.  Thanks for this gem (along with your many others, while I'm at it), Jacksmith.



Author's Response:

Thanks man.  I figured if the more legitimized literary genres can get roasted, macrophilia shouldn't be excluded.  I'm glad to hear you like my stories.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

Unlike certain other people I thought you did an excellent job on this parody. It was not only entertaining, but also quite informative on the various macro-tropes that exist in almost all giantess stories.

Also I think everyone who attempted to criticize this story for "not being funny" needs to come up with a valid complaint. Simply put; the fact that the author's personal taste in humor doesn't appeal to you is entirely subjective, and not at all related to the overall quality of the work.

In short this is some Damn good writing Jacksmith.

P.S. I apologize for any spelling or grammar mistakes I made. I wrote this rant in a hurry.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I can of course acknowledge that what I find funny isn't going to be liked by everyone, but the attempted humor wasn't even necessarily the point of this thing.  The story was really just meant as an off-color bit of commentary.  Hopefully people could also tell I wasn't trying to condescend to anyone, since I heavily made fun of the tropes I personally use the most.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Tanafen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

I have to admit...and I really, really, really hope this doesn't discourage you from future stories, but this story, was utter crap! Completely useless and unnecessary. I get that it's a parody, but it's not funny, not sexy and not interesting.

This stands as dark spot on your shining track record of unbelievably epic stories. You are a master of masters, the best author in the category of violent and cruel giantesses. You are the best, the foremost and the champion of this site, and whenever you posted a new chapter to one of your stories, I would clap my little hands in excitement.

I so hope that you will continue Julia, The Freshman and/or Toy Teacher or even give us something new and exciting, because you are my favorite author here.



Author's Response:

Ouch!  Well, for one thing, it really wasn't meant to be sexy at all.  To me, because macro stories are such a big part of my, as well as most people on this site's, sexuality, yet still fraught with so many odd little tics that I thought it would be good to poke some fun at it while still acknowledging my enjoyment of the whole genre.  I'm guessing this kind of thing is not really your speed, hence why I notified of the story's satirical nature several times in the opening segment.  That's also why this isn't in the same fictional timeline of my other stories, because this is more a piece of commentary on giantess fiction than an actual story.  What's funny to some is just not going to work for others, much how the things you might enjoy in some of my more "serious" work are disliked by other members of the community.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

Seem in most GTS stories every woman either wants to act all motherly and caring with the small man they find, usd him as a dildo or torture the hell out of them. And of course if they're outright giants then go on a rampage and become queen of the world.

Oh and in response to your response with regards to my idea about a giantess Carly, I dont think it will be as long as your Blackmail series where the brother is shrunk since she could probably become like the ruler of the world depending on how big she got.

Author's Response:

I'm sure Carly would endeavor to become ruler of the world even if she wasn't able to grow at all.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

This is a really cool idea. This initial chapter is so elequently named. I know the first chapter in the new story I'm writing will be a 'Unsexual set-up part'. I actually mentioned the very subject of a school hallway in a review I left earlier in the week.

There are some things that really annoy me that I see in lots of stories, although often I keep my mouth shut to avoid an argument. One thing I have noticed is that the name Mike is used frequently on this site; I should know. I've submitted over 900 reviews. Plus, every other character seems to be a blue eyed blonde (often a cheerleader). I wonder if you'll incorperating these, amoungst other clichés. I can't wait to take a look at the next chapters.

Also, whenever cup size, in terms of breasts, is mentioned they always seem to be a C cup. I've never checked to see how big C cups actually are because I don't think it's necessary for me to do so. To me they are small, average, large or of unrealistic proportions (because some people like to write about or draw such sizes).

Here:

homosexual to not

I think you mean:

homosexual not to



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews.  The thing with cup sizes has occurred to me as well; in the stream of a story, especially, it seems like it makes more sense to use more general terms than exact measurements, but there it is.

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

Nice prologue, your sense of humor in this makes it very enjoyable to read. Pretty unique around here. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  More will be up soon.

Reviewer: Bianca Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

why did i just picture miley cyrus and jimmy fallon back in high school? well done.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

Welcome to the parody club Jacksmith. Now you'll begin seeing Macro tropes in every story you read from now on. Tis the curse of writing one of these. ;D



Author's Response:

Oh believe me, I've been seeing these things for a loooong time, but just haven't figured out the angle I wanted to take on writing a spoof of them until now.  I definitely enjoyed reading yours a while back.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

Hahaha, can't wait to FAP to this. =P



Author's Response:

Warning: story may cause spontaneous bouts of uncontrollable sexing

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

Yeah I can tell the similar story line, but it is different. Glad to see your going to be a little more active.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

It is shorter than what I would like but I love this! Carry on you excellent writer!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  The coming chapters will be longer than this one.

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