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Reviewer: loreanb5 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 12...The Great War

Good job

Reviewer: loreanb5 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 12...The Great War

Great story so far.Keep it up.

Hope Nick and Shyna kids(nice if she a triplets-twin girl plus boy in one birth).Hope the Kids grow to be as big as Nick and having them make grow to 20 t0 50+ ft.be nice if Nick has many many kids with Shyna plus the same with many other females in his peoples lands.Also hope Amy many bif kids from action like she got in this lastest chapter(#12).Hope you read this in time and consider going with my suggestions.Again greak work so far.



Author's Response:

Oh don't worry. Their kids will show up again later on :)

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