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Reviewer: Crocodile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6...War Is Hell Pt 2

The young ones prove to be just as lethal as the parents are..  But it looks like there's trouble with Dad.. We'll have to wait and see what that may bring.

 But I must say, it's nice to see a good old fashion crush to salsa and swallow them down fest like this story is certainly turning out to be.

I really like the setting of this story too.. This family has the opportunity to become Olypic Gods if they can hold it all together. :)

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