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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Crazy prologue, if you continue writing this it should be interested to see where it goes.

I wonder what Rachel is like? is she a sweet little angel, or a mean bitch. I know that if I was screwed out of a childhood of wealth and luxury, i'd be a total ass.

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah this definitely has some potential man! I like how you mention he still feels in control of the Situation. Curious to see where this  goes big problems pending as well!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, yes,  Griffin sounds like a real life G.I. Joe ( w/ the scar and the stubby brissle)  he could be in for a very interesting mission with this miniature shuttle and his tiny crew. 

So, I instantly imagined Rachel, as Jennifer Aniston on 'Friends'.  maybe?  ;`)

Reminded me of that old classic movie; 'Fantastic Voyage', as I visualized your discription....  Nice start, but don't forget about 'Big problems Pending',  can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah. I even thought about giving Griffin an eyepatch just to complete the grizzled warrior look. 

Yes, feel free to imagine any character's appearance I write about in any way you want, especially if it makes reading the story more enjoyable for you. 

Don't worry, I wouldn't be able to forget about Big Problems Pending even if I wanted to, which I do not, haha. 

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