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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Now, maybe we'll see if Ana is blonde, brunette, or redhead. ;-)

Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

Cliffhanger! Love it, keep up the good work. I believe the next chapter presents a perfect opportunity to rev things up. 



Author's Response:

Thanks DuffyBear! Yes indeed, I hope I rev'ed it up enough for you. I had to get Ana out of the office before the real fun can begin!

Reviewer: PoweredByCaffeine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great story so far! I love the whole research project idea... makes for a nice read. I like how you have good spelling and grammar, too. I wonder if Eric will find his way back to Katie, or if Ana will keep him prisoner... Guess I'll find out ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you PoweredByCaffeine! Honestly that was hardest part trying to come up with a premise for the shrinking that wasn't overused. Don't worry, I didn't set up all the characters to not use them! 

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