Date: December 22 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 27: All Have Our Choices to Make
Really hate when the main characters are killed and don't come back, but maybe they do in act 2 and 2.5 but I'm steering away from them atm
Author's Response:
Sorry, but Isabella is dead. And just like real life there is no coming back from it.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 27: All Have Our Choices to Make
"Alas, poor Sanders! I knew him well. A fellow of infinite jest."
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 27: All Have Our Choices to Make
Hot damn, this is intense beautiful tragedy. You've set the bar very high for Act 2.
Author's Response:
A bar I intend to blast apart.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 27: All Have Our Choices to Make
Aviel you clever clever girl had me fooled half way through, then came the suggestion of the catgirl. She was cruel but needed to be otherwise he would have surely been killed on the spot.
[i]one catgirl escaped[/i] one very intelligent and over eager catgirl no doubt.
It's a shame Isabella died, but it seems we have a new giant on our side and it seems in order to beat the Society being underhanded might just be the way to do it. Can't wait for ACT 2.
Author's Response:
That...might be an explaination, yes. I will say, like I mentioned to a few others. Remember that Pyrrha had blonde hair where as the catgirl Sanders was facing was black. And he would have recognized Pyrrha.
The underhanded part though...well lets just say the Resistance isn't exaclty going to paragons themselves.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 27: All Have Our Choices to Make
Nice an early update!
This chapter was awesome and even more emotional than the last one. Angela is still a bitch and really don’t know how she became a Matriarch. I almost felt sorry for Aviel until the last third of the chapter when she made a complete face-heel turn. Still part of me hopes she is doing all this to make her loyalty to the Society as legitimate as possible and that she knows that the Society is corrupt on some level, but couldn’t do anything about it at her minuscule size. I also don’t know if she expected Pyrra to save Sanders or if she really was just being as cruel as possible. Wishful thinking since as much as I disliked Aviel’s attitude on things I didn’t want her to go all evil.
I feel for Sanders the most, though. He lost two close friends with one being his enemy now. He has very few people he can turn to. Fionne will be fed Society lies and believe he is dead. He’s probably going to join the resistance due to his hatred for the Society. Could he even go back to his family and tell them what happened? Probably would be too risky.
Excellent and emotional chapter all around. Can’t wait to see what else is in stored.
Author's Response:
Just have to wait and see if she did. Though, to be fair. Pyrrha had blonde hair where as the catgirl Sanders got was black-haired.
Gabby is still around, sorta, but yes right now, assuming Sanders is even still alive, he has pretty much noone.
And thanks for the kind words.