[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 23: Revenge
"Resistance bombing," my foot!
As to the unit's disbandment being "better?" That's highly debatable. The lesser of two evils is NEVER better! It's simply more grudgingly tolerable (emphasis on the "grudge"). As to the fight in the mess hall? Stupid? Yes. Half-cocked? Arguable (considering how the targeted parties got their asses handed to them, which is _not_ usually the case in such fights). And, with all due respect to Madame Catherine: how the frig were Isabella et al supposed to _know_ there was an undercover investigation of Slutice and company already in progress?
Sorry for the long-winded review. I tend to get that way with stories I get emo-involved with. Which, believe me, is high praise for this one, indeed! :-)
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 23: Revenge
While it's clear Lutice is crazy, it's hard to say if it's natural, or a cause of her work, or something else, but her brief bouts of lucidity regarding Sanders are perhaps more disturbing than if she was an out an out villain.
Should be interesting to see where are tiny heroes end up. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Don't want to say much, but I will say I don't generally like out and out villians. They are OK once every so often, but I far prefer a villian that you can kinda see their point of view or at least feel bad about.
There are a few just out right EVIL people in this story, but most are not.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 23: Revenge
Tsk tsk tsk…. Is all I can say… I knew going in bull headed was going to get them into serious trouble. But who knows, maybe Isabella can go rouge now since she doesn’t have a job.