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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 22: Old and New

P.S.---the word is "consolation."

;-)

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Date: November 24 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 22: Old and New

Well, thanks for giving us this chapter, prior to the holiday. And, believe me; you did a great job depicting the reunion!

Flonne's repressed memory--about faes that are apparently trained, by the Swords, to pre-emptively attack--was plausibly rendered. And that bit about heavy punishment for Swords and Shields caught in the act of dueling each other to the death?

I have a hunch that's more for _allowing_ themselves to be caught at it, rather than for the dueling, itself.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22: Old and New

Unless the scouts carry recording gear on their person, it’s going to be hard to prove that Lutice’s squad was at fault for the confrontation that led to Sanders getting “killed”, especially with Sanders actually being alive. While I understand their rage, going in guns blazing isn’t going to help make their case at all. I have a feeling the leaders are going to end up siding with the swords because of it.

What is interesting me more is Fionne’s backstory. I don’t think she was cloned. And Morgan might know more into how fairies are really created.  

Also, first!

 

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