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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perspective

Maybe the frequency wasn't set for any of them, at the time(?).

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perspective

Ironic that this chapter is called perspective when Aviel is deaf and blind to anything but society drivel. Outside of that, the plot is definitely thickening and I'm very curious what the deal is with Manchent. I expected Sanders to fall into the ressitance but this is much better. 



Author's Response:

Well it was more to give the reader some perspective on the Resistance. Up till this point, we have pretty much only seen them through the lense of the Society and now we are getting to see them without that lens warping them. At least in part. Of course, Aviel IS right that the Resistance has burned down entire villages before and slaughtered people. And remember, she has lost her parents AND two partners before Sanders to the Resistance. She has reasons for being rather...hostile toward anything they say.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perspective

Hmmmmmm! Sounds more like this "jammer" might be some kind of subsonic vibration projector. Such vibrations can cause intense feelings of anxiety when they hit the human nervous systerm. Even panic!

Author's Response:

Possibly, but then why didn't Aviel, Sanders, or Flonne feel said affects during the train attack?

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