Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 9: Overhead

Hey I already did my part!

Anyway this chapter was good. Aviel was annoying but now she’s crossing over into bitch territory with that arrogant remark she made to Isabella about not making the same mistake she did.  She’s growing blind by her own desires. But it showed that Isabella has remarkable restraint as a giantess because she could have easily put Aviel in her place with that remark. I’m not sure if Isabella is going to get through to her before something bad happens, pride before the fall and all.

And I figured Isabella accidently crushed a partner or something but not her husband. That’s a raw deal. I don’t blame her for breaking down at the end of the chapter. 

As for the general plot.... well it's thickening! Interested to see how it goes. 

 

Author's Response:

Yeah for doing your part!

 

Glad you enjoyed it and that you seem to be getting into the characters. We will see if you keep the same attitude to them as the story keeps going. Thanks for the comments and thoughts. Seeing that people like my story keeps me going and seeing you give your thoughts on the characters is really interesting to me. It gives me...ideas....