[Report This]Date: August 03 2013 6:47 AM Title: The Giant Girl and Her Master
Yeah, this is a very good start. This story is seems to be really my cup of tea.
It's interesting that the humans are in the position to abuse the giants.
Writing style is very good, I don't think you need to worry about that.
I'll definately will follow this.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pico.
The humans are at a slight advantage due to their technology and long lifespans giving them the ability to be so cruel, but the giants have pure brute strength so every Atlantian who is around a giant will have to watch their backs.
Also thank you I was having doubt about the quality of my writing, particularly my grammar.
I look foward to giving you something to follow.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2013 8:22 PM Title: The Giant Girl and Her Master
I like the sci-fi aspect of this story, and the space-age enviroment that you've created here. The giants/giantess as 'pets', was a different aspect totally... as compared to most of the storys on this site.
That was a real cliff-hanger there at the end! Nephila might take advantage of her little roomate and decide to give him something to worry about...
Yeah, I think your off to a fasinating start!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review wildcatman.
And trust me Nephila is quite the handful, she will make trouble for our main character