Reviews For The Spa Job
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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 10:13 AM Title: The Games End and a Victor is Crowned

I just realized I forgot to comment when you first posted it(!), and I can't really decide what to write here -- there are just too many things in here :)

I feel tempted to comment that I didn't expect it to end so fast, but the truth is, I thought you had quit, and I definitely didn't expect a sequel, so... XDDDDDDDDDDDD



Author's Response:

I had the whole thing written before I posted the first chapter here, I wanted the later chapters to include art from Smushed Boy.  I originally planned on the training taking several chapters, but my PhD program was starting and I wanted to get Smushed Boy a finished story.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 12:25 PM Title: The Games End and a Victor is Crowned

Well, it looks like he's been completely broken in. Too bad for him! :-(

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