[Report This]Date: July 09 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope she is what I think she is, fast, quiet, needs blood. If so I've never read a Gts story like this. Maybe she will be the humans revenge on the giants. Like use the tinies as bait or something to ambush the giants. Anyone I love the style of writing so far.
Author's Response:
Im sure that EVERYONES figured it out by now, its not really meant to be a big plot twist because I've given enough info for anyone to put two and two together.
Date: July 08 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
At the start of the chapter ants and roaches are mentioned, and with this in mind, I think that it's safe to assume humans have shrunk rather than them co-existing with giant people. Unless of course, this story is set on a planet other than Earth. The thing about Micro stories is that if they are to be believable, they are best suited to being unaware stories. I have nothing against Micro stories but authors tend to ignore the size difference.
I am reminded that in the summary it states that Kim is the size of a skyscraper and Tommy Micro sized. Therefore, according to the stated sizes (the growth and the shrink), if a flea (an entity of a similar size to Tommy) is placed next to an object slightly taller than the Empire State Building (assuming Kim is close to 501ft than the 5279ft upper limit for Mega), that is the kind of difference in size you have specified.
When he was about to go into the glass jar I was half expecting his new home to be her belly button for some reason; I think it was the way you introduced his new home, coupled with the fact that Tommy is really supposed to be a little smaller than her finger nail. Despite my gripes about the story I am finding it to be an enjoyable read so far.
Author's Response:
1. In as few words as possible: yes, its basically on a different planet. I'll get into this more later.
2. He is definitely NOT that small. He is a bit smaller than her fingernail; when I first wrote this I was thinking that SHE was about 800 ft tall and compared to her he would seem about a half inch tall...Humans are normal size, hes like 6ft! I think I mention that Tommy is about the size of her fingernail in chapter 3 but I might have taken that part out last minute...But yeah it is kinda confusing that I did that, but now that I want to change it I cant for some reason...If I took the part that helps with size comparison out of chapter 3 I'll add something in chp4. Thanks for bringing it to my attention, Im sure your not the only one that was confused.
3. Well, I was trying to make it seem that she was gonna, well shove him in her girly part. Thats why he was so worried about it, he's had bad experiences with that area before.
Date: July 07 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Does Kim have a multi-personality disorder? I can't see the connections in her behavior.
Author's Response:
Its a little more complicated than that...