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Reviewer: Buttcrush313 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can you please continue the story? It is really really amazing

 

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

More? Oh so please, can there pleeease be more?

I loved every bit of it, but there just weren't enough bits to love!

Can you please add another chapter focsing on Cynthia, and her fat ass?



Author's Response:

I will see....

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I believe you have a good start here,but it needs to be separated into paragraphs.



Author's Response:

Yeah I knew and just have done done that..thanks for the compliment :)

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, love the scenario I just wished it was longer. BTW will there be more. You get a 10 out of 10.



Author's Response:

Thanks friend,my writing is not yet finished,I've made the first chapter longer right now..and am thinking about writing the second one. :)

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