Date: June 26 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think they should say who will watch him at night and who gets him what days. I think these should be different since he should have a prenament "home" and I think that it should be Brooke. I would like her to be more evil and kepp him in her underware drawer of make him sleep in her shoes/socks/stockings. I hope you take these ideas under consideration.
Date: June 25 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think this is a great concept for a story. Take the ideas of the fans of your writing and GTS incest and write a fantastic story that everyone can enjoy. I got more ideas then I can count. I'd love to chat with you through SMS on AIM or Skype about them. My email adress is email@example.com just tell me if you want to talk.