Date: August 15 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Going great. Keep it up. I'd like to see this new girl take everyone out for a healthy dinner and it gives them all bad gas and they pass the bug boy around to see who smells worse. Not a big fan of male giant stuff though. And maybe throw some more butt action in there always good!!!
Date: August 13 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great story, I hope there is less M/m content and more F/m, FF/m, F/mm and FF/mm. Next I want to see him used as a lesbian sex slave for his mother and Tara or Tara gets to keep him a while and is a lesbian. Either way I donot want them to be gentle. Also future Ideas maybe Brooke and Skylar are atheletes and for when they have games they get to use their slave(s) [I still hope hal will shrink too] no questions asked. Maybe brooke is in volleyball/cheerleading and skylar is in track/basketball.
Date: August 11 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very well done :)!! I love how you did some giant male stuff, and I especially loved how Hal was unaware for most of the time. The giantess interaction was very good as well. As for what Jake should experience next, I think it's his mom's turn to have some fun... As for what she does, I'd like to see him give her a foot massage or something.
Keep up the good work!! ;D
Date: August 08 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the latest chapter. From the the tiny brother crawling on his brothers hand, to his experience as Hal masturbated, to where he put him when he was done. It was all great!
I hope Hal gets to enjoy his brother longer after he's seen the light. I'd still love to see some cock vore or maybe he let's his brother crawl around in the wrinkles of his sack or if you want to get really crazy he could shrink him down even smaller when he's swimming in his load so he's the size of sperm. Let him see what it's like to be really micro! Keep it as perverted as possible, maybe even write a few chapters with deaths and rewind before he died at the next chapter. I hope we see Jake suffer even worse at the hands of his oh so loving family.
Date: August 07 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
And it just gets better and better. I'm a great fan of micro stories, and wish there were more good ones around. I've enjoyed the aware parts of the story, and while I'm not into giant guys, I like that you've moved into unaware stuff too. It'd be great to see something like the brother realising where his tiny sibling is and getting revenge on his sisters with some more unawares stuff.
The proper-micro aspect is great too. I'd love to read about him getting trapped in the wrinkles of one of his sister's assholes, or glued with sweat to one of their underarms or in their groin (I'm not an armpit guy, but it's rarely done and it's kinda believable that he could end up there or be put there by his brother without the person knowning). It'd even be nice to see a return to the nasal stuff earlier, with the protagonist now at his even smaller size. It'd be amazing if because of his tiny size the girls would pick him up with a saliva-coated finger much as we do for tiny bits of plastic and food and such. I'd love if they forgot about him while he was trapped somewhere on their body too.
I wrote so much about what 'I'd love' that I feel bad. I really just want to say keep up the fine work. I still check back for this all the time. It makes me want to take up writing, too!
Thank you so much!
Date: August 06 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm loving how the story is going, the level of cruelty is awesome as is the creative ways that our poor shrunken son/brother is suffering. I'm really looking forward to seeing him as a mastubatory aid for his unknowing brother. I'd love to see the micro brother getting up close and personal with Hal's member, the brother not finding his micro sibling until after he's done. Seeing his own brother so puny in front of his giant cock, so helpless convinces him his mom was right and his brother is his to play with. He comes up with the most humiliating punishment of them all, he cock vore the nearly microscopic brother. We never read it but moving him down his cock to his balls seems like the kind of nightmarish hell our protagonist would suffer the most from. He could be left in his sack as Hal informs his family that he's seen the light and where the smallest boy in the house is. I can see them all getting a laugh out of it and congratulating Hal while poor jake squirms in his balls.
I hope you go with that, but whatever you do will no doubt be really good. Can't wait to read more, I hope your upload spree never ends.
Date: August 06 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter, I wonder if hal will be mad or glad. I hope mad and throws a fit and eventually he ends up shrunken and he becomes a toy to his family as well. I also hope that you make it possible to only grow him to a certain sixe. Both of them should have min and max limits. Please let me know what you think.
Date: August 05 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am cool with folks that don't like cruel stuff like this between family members. However, this is the perfect kind of story for me. The absolute cruely without hope for reprieve for this son, coupled with the poweful feet of his siblings and mom, makes me super excited to see more meanness taken to a pungent and fatal end! I do have to say, while this is just my own opinion, I hope the brother steers clear fo anything interaction with his young, smaller brother.
Date: August 05 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
For some reason the way his family is treating him depressed me when I read this, it it were some random strangers or a girlfriend but his own mother...This story kinda reminds me of "A child named it" in the sense that his mother torments him and only him as the youngest and the siblings are join in on it.
Im sure that it wasn't your intention for people to feel that way about this story, at least I think so with the semi-lighthearted tone you have. But some of the tidbits you've given such as how his mother said they were just gonna leave him in the beginning or how she said that she'd shrink and torment do her children and doesn't include Jake just got to me for some reason.
I cant help but feel bad for him, his own family doing this to him and from what you've described it isn't because he was a douchebag or asshole, it was because he was simply a loser...I put myself in his position as I read this and I felt like killing myself.
Anyway, Im sure that this isn't what youd intended from this story and I HAVE read MUCH MORE violent stories on this site...But this one got me a little emotional, I dont know why. But hey, I got a different sort of "enjoyment" out of this than most people so I really like this story!
Date: August 05 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the past few chapters, despite being a forced-footsmelling fan. In fact, given how tiny he is now and the monstrous smell of his sister's and mother's feet, I am going to hope hard that this story ends in a fatality. And I know you enjoy the forced-foot stuff, too. So, I am voting for Amy to scrunch her super tiny son under her mammath toes and let the pungent smell destroy him. I think that would be an awesome ending and a way to finally introduce (one time only, of course) her much-lauded foot stink.
Date: August 05 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Chapter 5 and 6 were really, really great, especially chapter 5. My penny for another chapter would be, of course I would love to see a vore and digestion ending somewhere, or a fatal anal vore one, combined with unaware. But I also would love to see a chapter with his brother, Hal. Maybe the girls leave him the size of a dust mite, and his brother accidentally interacts with him, and because he doesn't know he's that tiny now, he wouldn't know that he causes some unfortunate events for his dust mite brother, also because he doesn't know, there would be no chance for him making him bigger again. An accidental/unaware anal or oral vore including a fatal ending with his brother would be great. Or maybe the girls put him even in the situation, and play with Jake and Hal in that way, putting Jake maybe in his brothers unwerwear, using a glob of glue on the backsides inner middle part and glueing Jake there, so he would take some deep diving later, which could go out of controle for the girls, not knowing anymore where Jake is, or Hal leaving the house unplaned, so the grils wouldn't have a chance anymore to make Jake bigger. Or putting Jake in cereals for Hal, mostly some unfortunate events would take place, at first they wanted to just play with Jake, but then comes a phone call or theres someone on the door, and Hal fastly eats his cereals and leaves for school. Anyway, an interaction with Hal and Jake would be nice to see, especially when Hal would be unaware about giving his younger brother some hell ride.
Date: August 05 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter, love how there Ideas were basically chemical warfare to get their "brother/son" out. I still think they should have a limited size change and that he is very durable which opens a whole world of unbearable torture.