Date: August 19 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really loved skylar, I'd love to see something with her for an ending. It doesnt necassarly have to end with his death maybe have her pretend he's dead and keep him as a sex toy. It could also be interesting to see him die with her anal beads or a butt plug.
Date: August 19 2013 4:31 PM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend
To each their own, but I'm not at all a fan of male/male gts interaction. I'm not judging anyone, just giving my opinion. I really appreciate that you're going to give SEVERAL endings. I think I'll be happy with a particular one, hopefully. :) Some folks appearantly didn't grasp that, thinking that this was the final conclusion. Also, each story has a theme and feel to it. I'm a fan of darker, cruel stories. This entire tale has been fairly dark and ominous and I have to strongly disagree with those that are wishing for a "happy" ending. Nothing about this awesome story has indicated that a happy ending was in the cards. I would kind of find it intrusive and jarring to all of sudden see Jake spared or safed somehow. It's simply unwarranted for this story. Happy endings can be found in other tales. Again, that's just my two cents, once again. :)
Date: August 19 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
kinda agree with kringles.
But not saying he should get revenge. I think it would be ironic if like they flush him down the toilet or something and he survives is found and becomes like a TV celebrity or something. Hes still small and everything but hes loaded and it kinda makes the family angry, maybe it could even be a setup for the family! Like they want him back or something...
Good story though, dont usually enjoy things like this, and I certainly cant write evil gts because while I like them, later on if they hurt or kill a character I like I want them dead. But I did enjoy this story for many reasons.
Date: August 18 2013 6:28 PM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend
Actually i wonder why they want to dispose Jake all or a sudden, in the chapter where Amy invited Tara they where so happy about his undistructabilty so they could torture him again and again and now they want to waste him?
If you want to bring the story to an end you could rather bring it to a point where Jake accepts that there is no escape from the hell of his siblings torture or such.
Date: August 18 2013 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've read many of your stories, and even though I'm a fan of Gentle GTS, I keep reading them. That must be your talent as a writer, and this story has held my interest. That being said, I still would like to see some kind of "happy" ending for the poor guy. You never mentioned besides the fact that he resembles his absent father, why the family hates him so much. It doesn't sound like he was a bad person, just a normal guy. Maybe if you explore the nature of the relationships with his family a little more, I might more easily accept his family's hatred and treatment of him. I think he's suffered quite a bit. He's had his life taken from him by his condition, and now the loss of the support of the people that should love him unconditionally. I'm frankly surprised he hasn't tried harder to kill himself after the first day, despite his apparent invulnerability.
Date: August 17 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just my two cents: I think Amy's feet and their potency have been forshawdowed enough that I'd like to see one death be at her pungent feet. I think it would be a ruthless way to snuff Jake out. In fact, I almost would feel sorry for the tiny guy...almost!
Date: August 17 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love his death to be butt related, specially his mother´s >w< I see some really interesting suggestions here and there, including one really interesting with hal´s butt. Anything with butts would be amazing >w<
Date: August 17 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ok the best ways for jake to die... to be sucked up into Skylar's ass never to return.. Or.. Eaten by Skylar/Someone and digested.. adding to her huge ass.. and whats left of him being just a fart.. There's my vote lol.
Date: August 17 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Seeing as you're one of the only authors on here who doesn't shy away from BBW material I'm really counting on you for this. Anything belly related would be amazing (smothering, belly button etc.) preferably with one of the sisters but hey, it's your story.
Date: August 17 2013 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
I got a few deaths in mind. All cruel, all humiliating, all perfect for this story.
-After the lesbian scene, the mom starts sucking on his tiny body, ready to swallow him, but spits him out. Any brief second of mercy is abandoned as Amy says she wants a more filling meal. She grows him to the size of an action figure, slowly forcing him into her cramped mouth before taking a big gulp. Trapped in her tight, slimy belly digestion doesn't come quick. He spends days slowly being digested, having to hear teasing and feel his death chamber shake as people pat and poke the belly from the outside. As he begins to pass out, the mother has one last moment with him. Telling him that feeding her was his best accomplishment in life and nothing more.
-Jake begs his mom for his life, offering to be her slave forever if she spares him. Feeling 'kind' she makes a deal with him. Survive one week deep up her ass and he'll be a member of the family again. Jake agrees, crawl into her ass and being sealed into darkness. He goes through Hell inside his mom, the smell, the heat, the constant moving, he feels like it’s sucking the life right out of him. As he lays deep in Amy's ass, unable to move and moments from dying, he wonders if he got close to making the one-week. On the outside, the mother frowns when she feels Jake no longer moving in her ass. Skyler reminds her that he did survive nearly two weeks in her ass, which is pretty impressive. The family laugh about Jake’s only impressive act was surviving his mom's bowels for so long and how dumb he was to think he was ever getting out.
-Jake finally learns the reason his mom hates him so much is because he’s the result of her mother having an affair with a coworker that resulted in her husband leaving her and causing her nothing but grief. Jake finally meets his real father, who’s more interested in fucking his mom then meeting his son. Amy places Jake on his fathers cock and has him fuck her with him, hoping he’ll be crushed or drown from the experience. Jake survives, barely, and Amy is tempted to just crush him, but then she gets another idea. Shrunken down to a speck of dust size, Jake is forced either onto the cockhead or into the cockslit. Amy gives Jake’s father a blowjob and Jake is shot into her mouth. He ends up nearly following a little dribble of cum out of his mom’s mouth, but his dad spots him and Amy just licks him up like a crumb and swallows. We last see tiny Jake squirming as he’s digested in her big, hungry belly.
More where these came from if your interested :)
Date: August 17 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
As you mentioned doing different types of endings I would love to see one or more of these ideas:
- Jake dies in an unaware way to the person causing his death, for example the girls shrink him to ant/flea size again and put him into the cereals of his brother Hal, whos again unware about the torture taking place of his brother. Jake, like in the movie honey I shrunk the kids, swimming helpless inside a giant cheerio, and soon would book a one way ticket down his brothers digestive tract.
- Jake gets anal vored by his brother in an unawre way, the girls glueing him inside the back area of his brothers tight boxers, or on the middle of the toilet paper, so when Hal would use the bathroom and wipe himself, Jake would be wiped deeply inside his brothers anus. Hal would later the day use the bathroom again, and some bowl movements of his brother would causing the last horrors in Jakes life.
- the girls would put Jake inside a small medicine capsular, they empty before, onside side is transparent. They would put the capsular inside a cruel situation, where it would be swallowed by an unarware person, for exmple Hal
- the girls would call Jakes best school friend to come by, telling some lie about Jake wanted to learn for the upcoming biology exam, while the friend waits, the girls would tell him Jake would arrive soon and hes just shortly gone for the store to by some snacks. the girls would give Jakes friend a dip with chips to eat in the while or a drink, where Jake was placed in before. Jake would be consumed by his best friend learn in a practical way how the digestive tract works from inside view.