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Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2018 7:38 AM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

I read this story a while back,why make it so violent did you hate the character Jake were the whole family hated him,this was a poor story I regret reading it

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 11:11 PM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

im not into hate and child abuse thats all it was

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Reviewer: feetarefun97 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: loyde Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

I was'nt crazy about this chapter,it started off good but ends up about smely feet a let down ,I would like to read about the mother with gentel sex

Reviewer: trans-giant Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

it was a pretty good story tbh. however, i felt it was a tad unnecesarily cruel to the character and i was disappointed with the ending. not what they did, but who they had do it. i hoped that if it came down to that, then someone in the family would do the honors since all the girls(particularly Amy and Skylar)were really sexy.

Reviewer: Brosus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love your writing style, man, it's truly some great stuff. I hope you do come on and put up those other endings one day. And, for the most part, ignore all of the haters.

I'll be honest, though, I'm not much of a fan of really sadistic giantesses myself. I get why others are, and I'm usually fine with it, but some of this stuff... like the mother promising better lives to everyone BUT him... truly chilling stuff, man. 

To all of those who dislike that kind of stuff, I recommend rather than just bitching, either ignore it or do what I do: copy and paste it into word, and edit some of the stuff out. Not hard.

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 1:03 AM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

Im looking forward Brooke's ending seriously bad ^^

Reviewer: probablynotgood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

you an asshole dude a mother fucking asshole the youngest the mother doesnt want to protect you are such a mother fucking asshole

Reviewer: probablynotgood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

god one more thing like this and im going to never even look at something by you ever again


Reviewer: probablynotgood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 4


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Date: March 30 2014 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 3


Reviewer: probablynotgood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

I HAVE SEEN ENOUGH I AM NOT READING ANYMORE OF THIS THIS STORY IS MOTHER FUCKING CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Mr E Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

"a house that he desperately wanted to live in." great line

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

This was incredible! I loved every aspect of it. The AV scenes were written so well and I hope that this is one ending that others have mentioned in previous reviews. The one where Skylar pretned to kill him but keeps him as er secret buttslave instead.

I'll be happy with any footslave or buttslave ending with any of the females

Reviewer: Mr E Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing story! but i was hoping you would post the alternate endings you spoke about. the ending you posted seemed like a unique idea but I personally am not into male giants so I was hoping there would be some variety to it and other options with other females would be introduced?

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hope to see this continued some day, it was the story I came back every day to check. If you need someone to bounce ideas off, drop me a mail.

Reviewer: Mouse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, not really my thing, as far as most of the fetishes go, but I really like micro, and I absolutely loved the beginning to chapter 6.

Here's hoping you do another story, somewhere down the line, that focuses on micro to such a degree. Nicely done!

Reviewer: Sora Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I want to see him meet his end in Skylar's butt :3 Or have her eat him and he end up making her butt even bigger! Plus a lot of teasing by her definitely! 

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story was great from its beginning and shaping or already shaped to something very great.I have 2 requests.
I see that you do every genre really well.For the continution of the story,i would like to have skylar shrink jake to quite a small size.Like smaller than 1/50 if possible then shows jake to her friends in school.Her giant friend really likes jakes size and asks skylar to buy her.Skylar says yes and jake becomes the slave of another giant girl.Then the giant girl invites every pretty girl from school to her party.She introduces poor tiny jake to them and jake passes from many micro torture.Like they use their tongues and play with the ultra micro jake.Then jake tries to fight their tongues only to see they are hundrends of miles tall and mountain sized salivia and othet dirty things like spit starts to fall over the micro jake.Im not done yet.I Have lotts of ideas to share dear pro writer.
Another way they torture him can be they use their teeth and tongues and make fun of his size.They make him their mouth slave and forced to clean their tongue.They threaten to eat him and scare him with their miles tall tongues.Second genre could be insertion or ass or feet.As for the insertion one,Teenage lesbian action could be great for jake to suffer They flrst lick and tease and use their splits over jake and then threat him to eat him.Then forced to stay on their pussies during lesbian sex.Ass one could be lesbian action once again.Two girls having sex and jake is between their hairy miles tall anuses and forced to watch the scene and disgusting things starts to fall over poor jake.Hell they could even use their anuses and threaten to anal vore him too.Feet one could stary first as girls lick and stick him between their miles tall toes.Then jake is forced to pass through the torture.Or you could add all these ideas to the next story you will be starting.Just have skylar at same age and use the schooll scenario i have mentioned.Please,hollow,consider all these ideaz i have written.Thank you.
Best of luck!

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