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Reviewer: Midgetme Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 8:48 AM Title: Entering School

It does need to be longer for readers to enjoy. It just seems like every sentance starts with 'Jay did this'. It is a very good story and does have a lot of potential.

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