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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2021 7:00 PM Title: Catch and Release

Oh man, why did he have to grow. Oh well, hopefully he is still not found.

Reviewer: Midgetme Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 8:48 AM Title: Entering School

It does need to be longer for readers to enjoy. It just seems like every sentance starts with 'Jay did this'. It is a very good story and does have a lot of potential.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 2:07 PM Title: The Shrink

A solid start, but it needs to be longer. Also we don't need exact heights for the characters. other than that though it seems good enough, and I feel confident that in time this story will improve.

Also congrads on including african characters a rarity on this website for some reason

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