Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

Holy Crap!!!
This is my kind of chapter. I don't think I could even say anything to express how truly perfect this story has become thanks to this latest chapter. I mean I seriously loved everything about this chapter it's making sense as to why Claire hasn't unshrunk them. An the part when Michael offered her the 50%(I agree with the fact that she couldn't trust them to just go on their separate ways) for his invention was just such a realistic situation. An of course the toenail painting part is just like you went into my head and wrote what I was thinking, awesome!!
An I can't wait to see what happens next, I also liked that Claire wanted to learn their names. I hope you take this as what it is intended to be a complement, the way that you write reminds me of Cayce(my favorite giantess author) which is the greatest complement that I could give.

aaron
PS I would have liked you to describe the 'porta potty' scene a little more thorough. Because I was wondering if they just go on the napkins or what?
An would you mind if I posted this same review on 'the city'?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. And that's definitely a big compliment, Cayce is among my favorite authors as well. 

As for the "porta potty," haha... I figured nobody would really want to read about it but I had to throw something in to explain where they'd be going when the shrunken people had to use the bathroom. Just uh... yeah. Couldn't really think of anything better than that unless Claire shrinks some actual porta potties at some later point, haha.

And yes, feel free to add this to the city as well if you'd like, although I haven't actually gotten around to posting it there yet. I should definitely have it posted there by tomorrow (Monday) night though. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think its a fresh idea! And yeah I read it pretty quick.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Now, the opening bars of the JAWS theme are running through my head. ;-)

Seriously, though: you did a great job of the shrinkies getting their heads together and assessing their chances for escape. Not too many such stories, here, do that anymore.

Author's Response:

Haha.

I'm glad you and Codeman83 enjoyed that. I was a bit worried that I'd be boring people by having long conversations between the shrunken group members but I felt like they would be important to the story. I think it's better for the story if I show how all the characters are feeling and focus on their time in the attic a bit too rather than skip this stuff and focus only on them interacting with Claire. 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

This is a wonderful GTS fantasy!  Claire is soo good at being naughty,  and her childish curiousity is magnified by her enormous size.  The alternate chapter was a clever Idea, and I thought that maybe you would do that a few more times, ( like every 3 chapters, or so) not enough to 'over-DO it though,  the playfulness of giantess Claire could be deadly in an alternate chapter, then return to herself within the actual story.

Shrinking their vehicals was ingenuious, the discription of her handling their tiny autos was very dominating and erotic from their tiny perspective....

As, the story progresses and Claire discovers all the functions of the handy little devise, I would like to see her reset the size of the shrinking to , 5" or 6" inches, maybe and enlarge one of her tiny captives, or just shrink another one down to this new size, and play with him a little...

I love this story and can't wait to see what you'll do with it next!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, I really do appreciate getting people's thoughts/feedback on every chapter! 

As for the alternate chapter, I'm glad you liked it. You're one of only two people that have mentioned it at all. There are a few scenarios I've thought about writing other alternate chapters for but so far I haven't gone in and written them. When I do write, I'm too excited about moving forward with the story to get to what comes next and that's probably the biggest reason for why there haven't been additional alternate chapters yet. 

Thanks for reading/reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy and that I hear your feedback again after future chapters!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice chapter, I'm still kind of wondering why she didn't help them, it's to make herself feel powerful right?

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Uh... within the story, yeah, the answer to that is pretty much yes. It's going to come up a little more sometime in the next few chapters.

Outside of the story, the big reason as to why she didn't help them is because if she did, I think this would have been a much shorter and more dull story, haha. I don't want to spoil anything but I have a lot of plans for this story and the tiny people need to stay tiny for these plans to come to fruition. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

Whoa! I thought I had already read and reviewed this chapter.

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have to agree with aaron on this amy wishes she was still the giantess, and bath time would be a fun idea for claire. Since she has so many toys!

Maybe as for food amy may not have unloaded everything from her car, perhaps there is something in there for them to eat?

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

This has been my favorite chapter thus far. I loved how Claire asked Jennifer to kiss her big toe. The way she acted like she would just keep it herself really steamed Jennifer but in the end she just didn't want this young girl driving her baby. That was masterfully written, but what I liked the most about it was that she didn't seem to be overly cruel and that is very rare for a sexy giantess like Claire. Well done. Also thought it was cool that she mentioned how great it made her feel.
Then the part where she gets the info from Michael about his boat was great because all I could think was bathtime is gonna be great lol. When are they going to eat? I mean they were shrunk before their cook out so they must be starving. Hope that Claire's nice enough to shrink the food first.

aaron
PS thought that when you put in how Amy was feeling when Claire pushed Scotts car around, that seems more than just Amy being embarrassed I think she wishes it was her doing it... While they were tiny at her feet.

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dude this story is amazing you've taken many major things that I like in a story and rolled them into one. The footplay and vehicle shrinking being the two major things at least for me.

I think I can sense the dilapidated car being ground to dust beneath her powerful flip-flops later in a display of her power over the group perhaps? And shrinking the vehicles and the machine was very smart on her part, it makes it appear they disappeared without a trace.

Your crafting a wonderful tale ill be eagerly awaiting the next chapters, great work!!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

I bet they all gang up on Michael, since it _is_ technically his fault.