Reviewer: ephemeral Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've been waiting for a crush scene, anticipating it.

It was good, especially for a first. I hope there is more...that is my favorite aspect of this fetish. For me though, shoes make it so impersonal...and seeing how you describe her feet so well, I can't wait for the moment there's an intimate meeting of flesh on flesh crush...although there being a flipflop in between this time is a good way to build anticipation.

Looking forward to see how this progresses!

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you you enjoyed! I know what you mean about it being more "impersonal" with shoes on, but you didn't want Claire to hurt her pretty feet on a sharp piece of metal, did you? Haha. 

I hope you continue to enjoy where the story goes, thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

Very nice.  The 'two' nuckleheads got their just due,  squished out like the insects they were.  Very fitting for the story, added a bit of force to the giantess...

One thing though,  you didn't actually reveal (in the story) that Claire shrunk their green car?  Just that when they looked up at her, she was just staring straight ahead...

They actually thought, that they had a chance to get away, thinking that she hadn't even noticed them, not realizing that they'd even been shrunken 'by her'...

I say again,...Very nice, Ding Bing!

 

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked the chapter!

I think you're asking if I mentioned in the story that Claire shrunk the car.. if so, yes, I did so here: “What the fuck did you do?!” yells the other man, snapping Claire's attention onto him. “Where is he?!” Claire quickly aims the device and pulls the trigger again, causing the second man and the green car to vanish from sight as well. Claire inhales and exhales deeply and takes a moment to calm down and collect herself.

Or maybe you're asking if... if the shrunken men thought that Claire didn't know they had shrunken? Anyways, I'm sorry if my wording was confusing... now I'm confused too, haha. 

Reviewer: Knot Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

I've been following this story since it began, albeit from the shadows, but I really have to commend you on a job well done. My own tastes veer toward the unaware you had in the earlier chapters, but you have done such a stellar job with this, that I keep coming back, hoping you have posted another chapter. Keep up the great writing! 

Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a review. And the shadows can be quite cozy, can't they? Haha. 

So I checked out your profile after reading your review and I read Malfunction. You were off to a great start, I'd love to read more if you ever decide to continue writing it. I've noticed it hasn't been updated in 3 years though so I understand if you've lost intrerest in telling that tale since then.

Anyways, thanks for reading and I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great update man! I think its great that claire finally demonstrated how powerful she truly is even if its just for herself to know. Nice work!

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enoyed! I know you of all people have been waiting for a vehicle to get crushed, I hope I pulled it off well.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow. Another great chapter. I can't believe how this turned out. Its like your writing exactly what I want to read lol. I would love to see her do something nice for them seeing as how she took away their lives an all. Like maybe deck out the shoebox with some battery operated lights an a door cut into the side or something, just something like that to give them some humanity back, an maybe a deck of cards an so couches from Michael an Amy's house. She could probably shrink anything really an they would appreciate it.
I would also love go see Claire take some of them(most likely Michael) to her room. But at any rate keep doing what you do my friend this story is superb and I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

PS I just saw 'Dredd' on Netflix and it was badass.

Author's Response:

Haha, thank you very much! Yeah, basically... the plan when I started out was to write the exact type of story that I would want to read. As the author here, I'm writing this story exactly as I would want to read it... as a reader... hopefully this makes sense, haha. 

So I've just been having a blast including all of my personal favorite aspects of these tpyes of stories and it's really great to hear in the reviews here that other people are having fun and enjoying the story along the way!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

Another great chapter, I thought for sure that snail was gonna get crushed though!

Author's Response:

Haha, thanks! The snail was part of a very weird inside joke. This probably won't be the last time you see a snail included, either by me or in the stories of a few other writers here. 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Claire should cause a little riff between her tinie's,  take one of them with her and spoil him good,  leaving the others to wonder what went on while they were away.  Amy could get returned to normal, by winning a game that Claire offers up to them.  Then, she could grab the shrinking devise from Claire, and well -you know.....

Then with Amy as the giantess, she could realize her dream and have a little fun with her tiny friend's.   ;`)

The attic is getting kind of, 'stufffy'  and they could all use some fresh air, maybe?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

Claire is only half-right. They could have been swallowed by some now-gigantic seeming animal or other had they opted _not_ to seek her help. But, that still doesn't mean what she's doing to them is right. Or, that they're "lucky." They're merely enduring the lesser of two evils; plain and simple, as that!

Author's Response:

Exactly. But try telling that to Claire, haha. Thanks again for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

I like how amy is envious of claire and wishes she was in her position, and claire seems to be tiring of the groups constant pleading to be restored. I'm sure she may have to demonstrate just how powerful she is again soon... great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, you and Aaron knew something was up a few chapters ago when Amy was watching Claire with a little too much interest, haha. 

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

I also wanted to hit on what Cary said before about her liking Michael, I think that's another element to the story that adds something else to it. Then the part where she says Amy would be jealous of her, I really hope you could expand on that like I said where Claire could possibly take Amy to her room for a discussion or some such thing about Michael. I really loved the part where one of the women(can't remember her name) was enjoying the smell of Claire's feet cause I was so glad that she took the time to properly clean her pretty feet then added lotion. And as I said I can't wait to see the next chapter when Claire comes back up to the attic for more fun.

aaron