Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh yeah!  Claire has got a whole team of little man toy's now,  Hm, and they'll think that she has resqued them?  She will have to keep them seperate from her other little pet's.

Wow, I hope that her mother doesn't find one of them, and decide to keep him for herself...

This is really a great chapter, hope that you can update soon and that youv'e gotten over that cold.  I just got over one myself, and I know how you feel.  But, It's that time of year again I guess...

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow dude there's a curve ball I didn't see coming! I'm wondering what claire will do with the passengers and the bus. I'm kinda surprised they didn't attempt to escape though...

Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

A nice diversion of expendables to further illustrate Claire's descent into full on power madness beyond the attic.

Author's Response:

I hope you like where things go in the next update

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Alright now I'm curious, I guess I'll take a stab at this just for my own sanity. I will purposefully leave out crucial details
scenario 1 is Amanda will find the tinies an try to help them only to end up shrunken herself...
scenario 2 will involve Amanda mistaking somebody for a bug *squish*
scenario 3 finds Amanda behaving like her daughter towards the tinies.
now I most likely will be wrong on all accounts but the thing that will be the likeliest outcome should be where Amanda gets added to Claire's collection. At any rate im extremely intrigued for the next chapter to come.

aaron
PS please don't let what I say influence your story, this is strictly speculation & conjecture.

Author's Response:

Haha. I really love that you're thinking over all the different possibilities. All I'm gonna say is this: you might be on to something there with one of those scenarios. Haha, other than that, I don't want to give anything away just yet. 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 17

Another great chapter.  Don't apologize for the wait, it was well worth it.  The tiny group of people trapped inside the attic are growing more apprehensive of their giantess captor.  The suspence is brilliant. 

The thought of Amanda being down there, and completely unaware of their imprisonment...  very thrilling!

I can't wait for this next chapter, it sounds like something eventful is about to unfold?

This is one of my favorite story's,  keep going....

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, I'm very excited about the next chapter. I should probably get back to work on it, haha!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great to see this updated again, I hope to see it continued again soon.

Author's Response:

Great to see you're still enjoying! I'm working on the next chapter. It'll take some time because I really don't want to rush it and risk compromising the quality, but I think it's appropriate to say it will be ready "soon." 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

I can empathize. It usually takes me two hours just to meet the mandatory minimum of 500 words!

As for thoughts? Well, Claire was suitably disarming in the puppy-eyed alibi she gave that police detective. But, I think she's being over-confident if she honestly thinks her mother will _never_ go up to the attic. Suppose, for instance, that she (Amanda) wants to have a picnic for just the two of them? Only the picnic table cloth is _not_ down on the first floor! ;-)

Author's Response:

Yeah, some days writing is definitely easier than others. It helps when you're really excited about what you're working on, though. Like back when I was writing the third chapter of this story, I was so excited to finally be getting to what I considerd to be an "epic" scene, the sentences just kept flowing from my head and through my fingertips as I typed them down. That's probably the easiest time I've had so far writing a chapter, and I still believe it's my best one. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 16

Evidently, b-9000 hasn't read the other fifteen chapters.

Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, I don't know. Guess it could just not be their cup of tea. Oh well, can't please everyone. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am VERY glad I came back to this story.

Claire is an amazing Gentle but bratty tyrant, I read backwards and oddly she seems to be getting better as she seemed to get worse(for them) the father back I went.

I don't mind the killing so much since I've read much much more gruesome things on this site and she did kind of do a good thing getting rid of those two.

That said in one night Claire has become a personal favorite of mine.

Author's Response:

Thanks, that means a lot. I'm trying to write her as a character that... although she's not always doing the right thing, there's still a lot of likeability to her. I'm trying my best to keep her neutral and somewhat unpredictable. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm very glad you came back too!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hmmmmmm! amanda's home for a few days, huh? This is probably the shrinkies' one chance to get some help. Or, at the very least, escape the attic. The only problem with the latter, however, is that, in getting to Amanda's room, they might somehow wind up getting stuck in her carry-on luggage when she goes on her next business trip!*

*I hate thinking ahead. It always gives me a headache.

Author's Response:

Haha, I really love when a story on this site makes me think about the possibilites of what's to come in the next chapters. It means a lot to hear that my story is interesting you enough that your mind is wandering off and thinking about what's next. Thanks for reading and reviewing!