[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Dingbing you have quite the talant for eliminating potential plotholes.
Author's Response:
Oh, man! Just noticed I had like 5 new reviews, haha! It's good to see you're finally reading this story, and I'm definitely glad to hear you're enjoying it. I look forward to continuing to hear your thoughts as you get deeper into it!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
"You and all your little friends are the size of insects, and I’m much, MUCH bigger than you. Therefore, I can do whatever I want with you."
Dat logic. :)
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Any teenager wearing a death metal T-shirt in a giantess story is basically saying "I'm a sociopathic teenager, but you'll never know that until its too late"
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is shaping up to be a good story man. I thought Amy was going to be the main giantess, then BAM she got shrunk as well. You pulled the ol' "Honey I shrunk the kids" trick.
Seeing that carycomic is commenting on this, I have the feeling that this will be a gentle story.
Date: May 20 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
As requested I will review this story, Mr. Bing
[Report This]Date: May 07 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Whoa! Deja vu! I thought sure I had read-and-reviewed this, already. Ah, well! If such is the case, it was no biggie to re-read. So, I'll re-review:
I think Jim is right. Claire's mom does appear to be the proverbial apple tree.
Date: January 23 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great work. I'd love to write out a massive wall of text giving encouragement, but I'll keep it brief. Excellent story, great chapter, unaware and micro/nano are two massive favourites of mine so maybe I'm biased, but great job. All the best!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and review, glad you enjoyed!
Date: January 22 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
How could one not like Claire? She puts people under her feet and her mother's feet. If a cute girl did that to me I'd like her. I thought this chapter was the best yet, the use of the mom in these kinds of stories is probaby overused (I did it in a story I have on here), but you did a great job. Can't wait to see more! I'd help you out with the drawing aspect, except I have no talent...
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks! And don't worry about the drawing thing... anytime I've ever tried anything artistic, it's always turned out depressingly pathetic.
Date: January 22 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
On the one hand, this seems too abrupt a change. Murdering people for fun is a big step up from holding people but not hurting them, and the last time she killed people she had some doubts about it. On the other hand, the scene was written very well. I don't normally like crushing, but I kinda liked reading your description.
Also, I like long chapters. Short chapters are over before I can really get into it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 19 is probably the single best chapter of gts fiction I've ever read, keep up the amazing work! Also, maybe stick to infrequent but long chapters (hate it when it's just an update of 500 words in a story).
Author's Response:
WOW, Thanks!
I agree, long chapters are great, as long as the author can keep things interesting.
With the exception of the very first one, I don't think this story has any other chapters under 2,000 words. I don't even mean for them to be so long, it just happens, haha. Sometimes I'm writing a new chapter for this story and it gets so lengthy that I just split it into two separate updates. I almost did that for this latest one, but I thought people have been waiting a while to see an update, I might as well finish it up and release it all as a single post.
I remember you reviewing one of the very early chapters, great to see you're still enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! I get ta be the hundreth reviewer? Cool! ;`)
Claire's Mom,, unknowingly'' murdering them tiny little micro-men... 'Stomping them one at a time, while the others were forced to watch! Amazing floor show!
The micro sized men most likely couldn't even see anything above her knee's, as they gawked up into the heavens and watched as she singled them out and stomped her massively huge barefootsy right down on top of them, and the whole time thinking that they were just little ants...
Nice! Claire's a pretty devious little Minx...
Can't wait to see what she doe's next!
Author's Response:
Yeah, thanks for the 100th review!
Good to see you enjoyed the chapter and are looking forward to more! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 22 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
You asked, so I will say I am disapointed by the direction Claire has gone. I hate to see cute girls fall into "madness". The whole keeping the people in the attic thing, certainly indicated that this was a possibility. But I still held hope that there was a line she wouldn't cross. I actually rooted for her when she crushed those violent men during the bed quest as they deserved it. That was a situation where I feel violence is warranted and maintains the "innocence" of the giantess. I'm sure a majority of the respondents here will demand more violence, and if that's the type of story you're shooting for, then that's fine. I'm just not part of that crowd and will rate according to my tastes. I will refrain from rating until I see what direction this story is headed.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! This chapter was very difficult to write. Having Claire finally do something "evil" was hard for me, but I needed a new conflict or the story as a whole was going to stagnate. I feel this was long overdue. There's a lot more to it than that but for now I can't say too much without spoiling things. I hope that you'll be able to enjoy the future chapters, but if you start losing interest in what's happening I completely understand, and I definitely appreciate that you kept up with the story for as long as you did!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
This chapter was great. I almost thought that the whole her shrinking the bus thing was going to be a dream sequence. But even though I'm not a fan of micro or the violence you made those scenes work very well. And glad her mom had a bigger part. Her feet sounded very sexy :) I just don't know how to take Claire being downright evil... Guess she felt like she had to get rid of them anyways so why not. Liked the part were she kinda slips up about the attic and had to make up an excuse. Still like Claire's character however and Amanda has become even more likeable. Wonder if she shows Michael and company the school bus? Can't wait to see what happens next
aaron
PS the wait was worth it. Welcome back.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Can't really answer say too much in response without spoiling things, haha.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I honestly could draw something but... I really don't like older women. At all. Sorry :c
Author's Response:
Haha, what? If you mean Amanda, she's not THAT old. And this is literally the ONLY chapter out of 19 in which she interacts with shrunken characters. There are plenty of scenarios with Claire that you could draw something from if you wanted to, I didn't mean I was hoping to see something exclusively from this chapter.Thanks for reading and reviewing though!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, Claire has certainly taken a liking to her newfound power...At the expense of innocent lives. Not that I stopped loving this story, despite its new direction but it does mean that I'm rooting for the tinies now! It was all fun and games before, and I agree that she killed someone out of self defense...But now it's just for her entertainment. GO TINIES!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: January 22 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah I have to say I was surprised that her mother went on that crushing spree! But NOT disappointed by it! This was ddefinitely worth the wait! Nice work!
Author's Response:
Good to hear you enjoyed! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Everyone has dark days, Claire's just come with occasional hazards.
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 16 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
first of all , good to see you again :D after such a long break ..
short update and we hope you will give such short teasers often with less intervals :D
in the end , no killing and vore , plzz
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Uh... I'll be completely honest with you, you may or may not be disappointed with some things that happen as this story keeps going, but I hope that overall you are able to enjoy!
Date: December 16 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
So glad to see the story back. Judging by the situation she must be planning on having her mother unawarely destroying some of the shrunken players, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, hopefully it won't be too much longer until you see what happens!
Date: November 08 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your late updates might loose readers concentration.specially at such situation when claire has whole bus of men in her hand ....
waiting.........................................
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm sorry it's been so long since the last update. I just haven't found myself in the writing mood lately and don't want to force myself to write and risk it resulting in a very poorly written chapter, you know what I mean? I hope people understand and I promise the next chapter is still coming.
Thank you very much for the review, it means a lot to hear that you're still interested in seeing where the story goes next.