Date: May 22 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks promising! I'm excited to continue reading, hope you come out with the next chapters soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm working on chapter 3 at the moment, I plan to have it completed and added here today/by the end of the night. I have chapter 4 nearly 100% planned out but it might be a couple days before it's actually written. Beyond that, I don't have individual chapters outlined, but I began this story knowing exactly where I wanted to take it and with certain events in mind that I still plan to write into place as time goes on.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. Although I was hoping for a bit more foot/toe play. Now Amy's gonna show up with nobody there. At that's how it will seen at first.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you! You seem to know exactly where this story is heading, well, through the next chapter at least, haha.
Date: May 21 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm having trouble reading your story. A space between paragrpahs might help. Formatting on this site is tricky but good luck.
Author's Response:
I see what you mean. I apologize, the format didn't look quite like that when I was typing it on my computer.
I'm going to get something to eat, I'll try adding some spaces as you've suggested next time I sign on. Thank you.