[Report This]Date: August 19 2023 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
This was such an amazing story! My favourite chapter was this one where the aware daughter is teaching her unaware mother how to squish bugs who are actually tiny people.
But the daughter knows what they really are 😏
The guy so confidently thinking no woman touches a bug and ends up getting squished was quite funny
Hopefully, you come back to finish this story one day
[Report This]Date: May 07 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Whoa! Deja vu! I thought sure I had read-and-reviewed this, already. Ah, well! If such is the case, it was no biggie to re-read. So, I'll re-review:
I think Jim is right. Claire's mom does appear to be the proverbial apple tree.
Date: January 22 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
How could one not like Claire? She puts people under her feet and her mother's feet. If a cute girl did that to me I'd like her. I thought this chapter was the best yet, the use of the mom in these kinds of stories is probaby overused (I did it in a story I have on here), but you did a great job. Can't wait to see more! I'd help you out with the drawing aspect, except I have no talent...
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks! And don't worry about the drawing thing... anytime I've ever tried anything artistic, it's always turned out depressingly pathetic.
Date: January 22 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
On the one hand, this seems too abrupt a change. Murdering people for fun is a big step up from holding people but not hurting them, and the last time she killed people she had some doubts about it. On the other hand, the scene was written very well. I don't normally like crushing, but I kinda liked reading your description.
Also, I like long chapters. Short chapters are over before I can really get into it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
This chapter was great. I almost thought that the whole her shrinking the bus thing was going to be a dream sequence. But even though I'm not a fan of micro or the violence you made those scenes work very well. And glad her mom had a bigger part. Her feet sounded very sexy :) I just don't know how to take Claire being downright evil... Guess she felt like she had to get rid of them anyways so why not. Liked the part were she kinda slips up about the attic and had to make up an excuse. Still like Claire's character however and Amanda has become even more likeable. Wonder if she shows Michael and company the school bus? Can't wait to see what happens next
aaron
PS the wait was worth it. Welcome back.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Can't really answer say too much in response without spoiling things, haha.
Date: January 22 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah I have to say I was surprised that her mother went on that crushing spree! But NOT disappointed by it! This was ddefinitely worth the wait! Nice work!
Author's Response:
Good to hear you enjoyed! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Everyone has dark days, Claire's just come with occasional hazards.
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks for reading and reviewing!