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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh yeah!  Claire has got a whole team of little man toy's now,  Hm, and they'll think that she has resqued them?  She will have to keep them seperate from her other little pet's.

Wow, I hope that her mother doesn't find one of them, and decide to keep him for herself...

This is really a great chapter, hope that you can update soon and that youv'e gotten over that cold.  I just got over one myself, and I know how you feel.  But, It's that time of year again I guess...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

This would make a great Dr. Seuss story:

"Jocks Beneath Her Sox."

X-D

Author's Response:

Haha, that's awesome. Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow dude there's a curve ball I didn't see coming! I'm wondering what claire will do with the passengers and the bus. I'm kinda surprised they didn't attempt to escape though...

Can't wait to see more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

Didn't see this coming. No way of telling what Claire has in store for these tiny bus goers.

aaron

Author's Response:

I know what's in store for them, but I'm not telling, haha. I hope you enjoy the next update

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

A nice diversion of expendables to further illustrate Claire's descent into full on power madness beyond the attic.

Author's Response:

I hope you like where things go in the next update

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