[Report This]Date: July 30 2013 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Now, the opening bars of the JAWS theme are running through my head. ;-)
Seriously, though: you did a great job of the shrinkies getting their heads together and assessing their chances for escape. Not too many such stories, here, do that anymore.
Author's Response:
Haha.
I'm glad you and Codeman83 enjoyed that. I was a bit worried that I'd be boring people by having long conversations between the shrunken group members but I felt like they would be important to the story. I think it's better for the story if I show how all the characters are feeling and focus on their time in the attic a bit too rather than skip this stuff and focus only on them interacting with Claire.
Date: July 30 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Its a good idea to keep the group's thoughts and plans out there. They are shrunk but still have ideas And hope for survival, your keeping a good repor going. Nice work on the speedy update!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked the chapter. I was afraid it would be boring to some people where it wasn't heavily Claire-focused, but I think it's important to give the other characters a little foucus when they're alone in the attic.