Date: March 23 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Dingbing you have quite the talant for eliminating potential plotholes.
Author's Response:
Oh, man! Just noticed I had like 5 new reviews, haha! It's good to see you're finally reading this story, and I'm definitely glad to hear you're enjoying it. I look forward to continuing to hear your thoughts as you get deeper into it!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is a wonderful GTS fantasy! Claire is soo good at being naughty, and her childish curiousity is magnified by her enormous size. The alternate chapter was a clever Idea, and I thought that maybe you would do that a few more times, ( like every 3 chapters, or so) not enough to 'over-DO it though, the playfulness of giantess Claire could be deadly in an alternate chapter, then return to herself within the actual story.
Shrinking their vehicals was ingenuious, the discription of her handling their tiny autos was very dominating and erotic from their tiny perspective....
As, the story progresses and Claire discovers all the functions of the handy little devise, I would like to see her reset the size of the shrinking to , 5" or 6" inches, maybe and enlarge one of her tiny captives, or just shrink another one down to this new size, and play with him a little...
I love this story and can't wait to see what you'll do with it next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I really do appreciate getting people's thoughts/feedback on every chapter!
As for the alternate chapter, I'm glad you liked it. You're one of only two people that have mentioned it at all. There are a few scenarios I've thought about writing other alternate chapters for but so far I haven't gone in and written them. When I do write, I'm too excited about moving forward with the story to get to what comes next and that's probably the biggest reason for why there haven't been additional alternate chapters yet.
Thanks for reading/reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy and that I hear your feedback again after future chapters!
Date: July 26 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great to see your writing again! I think the idea of collages or even some renders from someone
Who has the ability to make them is a great idea. Hope your laptop gets fixed soon, the new chapter was a welcome surprise hope you can add more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks! No one has expressed any interest yet in making anything, which is a little disappointing, but maybe someone will sometime in the future.
I'm glad the new chapter was a welcome surprise to you, thanks for continuing to read and review!
[Report This]Date: July 25 2013 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, wow1 I'm the first reviewer for this chapter? Awesome!!
Seriously, though: I'm surprised she didn't hum "The Teddy Bear Picnic" while they were eating. It would be in her apparent nature to consider that funny.
Author's Response:
Yes, you're my first review since I've returned. Thanks! I'm wondering if perhaps I've written something of a rotten chapter, though. I was hoping to receive more feedback here on the chapter, and I haven't heard from anyone on giantesscity yet as to whether or not they enjoyed it. Ah well.
As for the Teddy Bear Picnic, I had to look it up. It did seem familiar though, I've probably heard it before a long time ago and had just forgotten it, but thanks for your mentioning of it, it was quite amusing.