Date: September 01 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh man, i sincerely want on Jack place.
Good job
Date: October 05 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
I would never give anyone my passwords. If things ever turn sour...well it's best not to think about it. Hopefully things won't but you never can tell.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this. Jack is busy pioneering his new girlfriends boobs, meanwhile all the normal people on facebook are giving him props for it.
...If only they knew lol.
Author's Response:
I do wonder how that would go over...
[Report This]Date: May 23 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really like how this story is going, there is a lot of affection between the characters and the dialogue is excellent. I wonder if Tricia will show her tiny boy friend to anyone else? Keep up the chapters and the good work, can't wait for more!!
Also, I had a question for you that does not relate to this story. There was a previous story you had not too long ago on this website, and then it disapeared. The story is called "The Pairing" I thought it was going great, are you going to reupload and continue this story?
Author's Response:
Any other characters... Sounds like a plan! I'll work on that idea!
[Report This]Date: May 22 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, I've read all five chapters in one sitting. And, I must say...it's been a privilege. Mostly gentle-giantess stories are a rarity, here And, you've done a marvelous job with yours.
Thus far! ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've mostly been recycling material for these first 5 chapters, but here, now, I extend out. Add in characters, different settings, etc. Etc.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Firstly, I never understood why people facebook, whatever... I guess - no, I have no idea.
Secondly, the password, well.. at least TWi1li@ms or similar to keep brute attacks at bay. Additionally I think it might have been much more interesting if he was stepping (jumping?) on the keys and she connected the letters, I am not trying to tell you how the story should go, just.. I would love if You made their play a bit more sophisticated and detailed, like while "writing" he could go "and now press shift, no, no, keep it down" - also very humbling that he needs help with such things, You know. Just a random idea to stimulate Your imagination :>
Thirdly - no offense, but... duck season?
Fourthly, when I write dialogues, I try to keep continuous sentences of a single character in the same paragraph - it helps the readers to figure out who says what.. after all we do not hear their voices so it is easy to get lost (like when she - apparently - said "You look tired." - just another random thought.
And lastly: tired after just several minutes? I know he orgasmed but still.. he just slept for a couple hours.
Otherwise all good and looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
No, I guess I should explain. I guess I could next chapter. His new body has many different characteristics about it. There's a lot and I'll most likely get them in.