Reviewer: Prodiginous Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I won't deny, I liked this story quite a bit. It was a well written "heat of the moment" type affair that had allot of heart put into it. However, as the story progresses, I've noticed a lack of attention from the author. It saddens me to admit that, but in the end this sometimes happens to good stories. My honest words to the author would be best said as: "Don't let it get you down, just keep writing what you feel strongly about and forget about the stuff you've lost vision in." Because remember, you can't force yourself to do (in this case) write something if you aren't feeling it anymore. That being said, it was a great story while it lasted. Cheers mate.

~Johnny

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I certainly dont think HE should have apologized, and I hate the way she expected an apology, some best friend. Other than that though, I think that both he and she changed their tunes too quickly...She went from kind, caring friend to dominatrix and he went from a struggling little guy to a willing slave.

Just some criticisms on my part, I think this story is pretty awesome overall though, your descriptions and smut are well written. I just feel like the two characters kind of just snappped into their pre-desposed GTS fetish personas too quickly is all.

Author's Response:

To be entirely honest, I feel they did too in comparison to the movement of the 'story' (I don't know if story does any justice). When I wrote Chapter 10 I intended it to be a 'satisfy the masses' type of chapter which is exactly what it was. 

Maybe I should add: 

"Chapter 10 and all content within or under the label 'Chapter 10' of the story 'My Best Friend?' is not in any way affiliated with the changing of actual characters personalities or otherwise and should be disregarded in regard to the plotline and Character Development

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

please keep the story gentle. If its annoying you just take a break of this one and write a different one.

Reviewer: Casanova Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is already a really cool story, and I feel like it works so well because it hits so close to home. All of us have probably imagined at one point or another what it would be like if our female friend found out about our fetish and then acted upon it. Your execution is top notch as well, and the crisp transitions between dialogue and exposition remain both true to the character as well as believable. As a result, in just a paragraph or two, both Jack and Tricia seem very well fleshed out.

I'd just like to constructively point out that at times, particularly in the first chapter, you have trouble with mixed tenses. Some parts are written in present tense, whereas the majority of the piece is in past. Probably an honest mistake, but one that crops up frequently in first-person narratives. Otherwise, it seems airtight.

Overall, great start and I'm excited for more. (And don't listen to those others -- more feet! [Or just write what you like. That's the smart thing to do.])

P.S. I watched DBZ a lot as a kid.

Author's Response:

Cas, I'm honored! I love your story so much and feel gratified that you even bothered to check mine! 

Reviewer: gerald Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice beginning, but please not only foot stuff - she must have some other ideas in mind and they should quickly find out that playing with feet is not the only thing they can do at this size...

Not to mention that 2 inch tall person would barely be able to do anything with them (except tickling, perhaps - still possibly nice, but really - that is why I am not much of a macro foot fan).

Anyway - hope she does not turn evil - that would be silly (even temporarily - sure, she may angry for something, but seriously.. she is his friend for how long?)

And of course - looking forward to the continuation. I hope they not only have some fun, but also talk with each other - she can always tell him what she feels about him while he is working, right?

Especially how she wants to have a conversation!

Author's Response:

Yo! Love your reviews! And don't worry man, foot stuff isn't my main 'thing'. I'll try not to be feet heavy. I'll go balance it out, ok? Happy reading!