Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Turning the Tables

Sorry about that. I never remember to rate when I review. I have to give this chapter a 10, which is basically the rating I'd give to every chapter you've written.

I enjoy reading about Steve with Kelsey, but Erin's forcefullness is just so hot. She just lost her virginity and now she's just raped a man. I hope to God that she's just starting to experiment with him, but I know I'll enjoy whatever direction you take.

Lastly, what the heck is with the 23(now 24) reviews for this story?? But I see a Read Count over 71,000. Come on guys. This is excellent writing. Very satisfying amount of smut with good character development. And it covers a wide range of the fetish(speaking of mouth play, insertion, ect.) I've been a lurker, but speaking with the authors and sharing my opinions is much more satisfying. Give it a try.

I'll stop now...God I can't wait for the next chapter! Ok, done.

Author's Response:

Man, you just made my day.  Thank you for your incredibly nice praise.  You'll have to be careful or people are going to think you're a sock puppet.  ;-)

 

As for the lack of reviews, I'm slowly starting to get over it.  For some reason this story seems to attract more lurkers than usual, probably because it's a little smuttier than most.  But the read count is a pretty good validation of its popularity.  And then there's you, who have perfectly illustrated the ability of commenters to have a chance to affect the story.  

 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I hope you enjoy the latest chapter.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Turning the Tables

Seems like Erin is taking full advantage of her newfound friendship. I'm starting to expect that the next chapter(or possibly next couple chapters) might entail some blackmail. She seems to be enjoying it a little too much to just stop with a 'fingerjob'.

Also, I went back and read Chapter 12 again and although I saw that Erin seemed to be a little rattled, it didn't feel like she showed much resentment. But that's just how it looked to me. I'm not the best at reading between the lines and seeing indications of emotional stress.

Loved this chapter. Mostly because of Steve's reluctance. It shows that he's not just in this for the sexual pleasure. And also because of Kelsey's reaction(however little of it we saw). I don't think she will like sharing her new boyfriend/boytoy.

Author's Response: Eh, you're probably mostly right about Erin. I had kept her feelings and motivations kind of ambiguous in chapter 12, partially to make her a little mysterious and also because I hadn't exactly worked out how she felt. But now that I have a better idea about her feelings she should be a little more consistent. :-) Glad you're enjoying it. And hey, feel free to star those reviews, good or bad. Thanks for keeping me on my toes.