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Reviewer: SomeRRight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Living Large

This is my favorite chapter and Erin is my favorite character. She's so devious, and her dark descent was wonderful, if a little quicker than I would have liked. I wonder if we could see more of her? Maybe now that Kelsey and Steve are both shrunk, she could come back to punish both of them for getting her in trouble.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Living Large

Well. I don't think that could of gone any smoother. Good to see that Erin doesn't harbor any anger towards Steve or Kelsey. And I also like how Kelsey is starting to view Steve. Their relationship is definitely progressing quickly(and in the right direction imho).

I didn't think you'd have this chapter up so soon. Hell of a way to start the weekend. ;-)



Author's Response: Haha, to tell you the truth I didn't think I'd have it done either. :-) I was hoping I had introduced some ambiguity about how Erin feels about what happened, or at least left the possibility open that she may be the slightest bit unstable. I will further explore her feelings in future chapters. Thanks for commenting. It's nice to know that there's people out there behind the read counts.

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