Giantess World
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Reviewer: SomeRRight Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoy Erin. That's one of my own favorite chapters, actually. I agree that Erin's descent wasn't paced correctly, and that was because she wasn't in my original outline. If you're still reading you'll see I've given Brie much more of a story arc because she originally was the main antagonist. Don't worry, Erin's definitely not gone for good.
Date: April 30 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin
Agh, meant to put that last review on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoy Erin. That's one of my own favorite chapters, actually. I agree that Erin's descent wasn't paced correctly, and that was because she wasn't in my original outline. If you're still reading you'll see I've given Brie much more of a story arc because she originally was the main antagonist. Don't worry, Erin's definitely not gone for good.
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Date: March 30 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin
Author's Response: Thank you. Having read your other reviews that is high praise.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin
Yes!
Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. Having read your other reviews that is high praise.
Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin
Author's Response: Yeah, I haven't quite worked out the exact tone to take regarding the loss of Erin's virginity, or even if it was technically that at all. I know the intended result I want this to have, now I just have to figure out the best way to get there. But I'm excited to have this new character introduced because it solves a huge problem I foresee happening eventually. I'm hoping to have a new chapter before the weekend. Thanks for reading. :-)
Date: March 30 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin
Uh oh. Sounds to me like she really enjoyed that, and considering she was a virgin(still is? not sure how that's classified), I'm geussing she'll want to keep Steve around for a while. Either that, or she's gonna think that he just violated her and things are about to get heated. I'm interested to see how this plays out.
Author's Response: Yeah, I haven't quite worked out the exact tone to take regarding the loss of Erin's virginity, or even if it was technically that at all. I know the intended result I want this to have, now I just have to figure out the best way to get there. But I'm excited to have this new character introduced because it solves a huge problem I foresee happening eventually. I'm hoping to have a new chapter before the weekend. Thanks for reading. :-)