Reviews For Birthday Wishes
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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Coming Clean

I really do wish that you made the brothe more unwilling. Great story though. Also I think I can see Brie soing something to him if she finds him.



Author's Response: Keep reading and bear with me. :-) Steve's time with Kelsey is literally wish fulfillment, but there may be other characters that will raise the fight in him.

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