[Report This]Date: June 20 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 12: Teacher
great ch. Im really interested in Ramsey and Kiri relationship, I cant wait till she finally opens up to him. I think Ramsey would accepted any relationship with Kiri.
I also like Ellie she seems like an interesting character but I dont think a slave fits her which is what makes her interesting, not sure wht a lynx looks like though.
I would only ask if u try to make chs longer. srry if u think they are long I just have a high standard for long chs. Or u could make the ch about one storyline. Its just Im more interested in Ramsey and Kiri than everyone else.
whatever u do I stil LOVE the story and hope for more updates sooner rather than later lol.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like Ellie I don't think I made it clear that she was the girl Dora outed in the chapter named after her. And if you like Ramsey and Kiri be excited for the next chapter it is all about thier relationship what is expected of Ramsey. OH! and she'll be talking alot more.