Reviews For Trials
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 3: Service
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Date: May 19 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 3: Service
Some of the paragraphs were a bit long I felt. However it's an alright story so I wll keep reading for now.
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Dude your grammerical critiques really mean a lot.
Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: Service
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Date: May 15 2013 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: Service
srry for not commenting earlier. I like the story. It seems it sould be heading in an intresting direction.
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What's important is that you commented now.
Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 3: Service
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Date: May 15 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 3: Service
Still to early for me to say what kind of story this is...Its just too early, good job so far though.
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I hope now that the story has really started you are just as interested.