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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 2: Found

When you say scene you mean seen. A scene is something from a movie.

And here:

Incredible dangerous

You mean incredibly.



Author's Response:

Thank you I try to implement changes as I find them. I will also update these chapters cleaner in the future and work on proofreading better before I submit.

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