Date: December 16 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lost
Awesome story but such a shame to not see the ending.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lost
Are you going to update this story? This story is too good to go stagnant.
Date: February 17 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lost
Hmm, I wonder if his friends will have an encounter with Kiri, it would be interesting.
Date: July 03 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lost
It may not be your Strength but you seem to be pretty good at it. I appreciate the effort it take to develop cheractors and their personalities. It helps feed the plot of a story......something that some people on this site don't care for, all they want is fetish material, which anyone can do, it takes talent and effort for an author to make a giantess story with a real plot. with this story alone you are one of my favorite top 10 authors!!!! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your opinion and feedback. I'm worried that people won't like it because I don't really delve into typical giantess fair.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lost
I hope im one of the few followers lol.
I love that kiri speaks english, hand signs and head nods isn't much communication. I guess it built trust idk.
how long are the games? 1 week a month? will kiri and ramsey team up?
Love the story and get exited every update, I just it was more often lol
Author's Response:
Yes you are indeed one of the few followers. Or a least one of the few who feels like commenting regularly thanks for that. The games take place over a 3 month timespan and are only held every few years. Anymore than that and I would feel I'm spoiling the story.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lost
Gripping story so far. I'm looking forward to learning more about these amazons inside and outside of the arena. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support.
Date: May 16 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lost
It's a nice start.
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Still as the days past he couldn’t help but think
You mean pssed not past as in the past.
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But could be eaten straight or brewed.
You mean straight away.
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It was a Chiki a small vaugely
I"it was a Chiki" is better as a separate setence or after Chiki have a -
Also, sometimes the names of the plants (proper nouns) don't have capital letters.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the helpful critique I try to catch these things but some pop up when re-read the story after I have posted it.....I blame my public school education for my constant grammarical errors including any that might be in this response.