Reviews For Not so Tiny Dancer
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 11:17 AM Title: A New Beginning

Fast-paced opener. But, the dialogue and narrative should be a lot more separated.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 9:33 AM Title: A New Beginning

Great start, but I wonder if Amanda will love him like she did or will she take advantage. If she takes advantage will Jordan still love Amanda. Cannot see how you write this one out.

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