Reviews For Not so Tiny Dancer
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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 11:14 PM Title: All things will come to an end

Great story, I did not see that coming at all. I just wish Amanda didn't kill herselfand got a taste for humans. Then we could have a sequel. Great story though.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 10:43 PM Title: All things will come to an end

Short story with a disappointing ending (just seemed to run out of creative steam).

And the begining had so much potential...

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 8:02 PM Title: Dance Class

I eonder what she has planned for dance class. Great addition, just wish they were a little longer.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 11:17 AM Title: A New Beginning

Fast-paced opener. But, the dialogue and narrative should be a lot more separated.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 9:33 AM Title: A New Beginning

Great start, but I wonder if Amanda will love him like she did or will she take advantage. If she takes advantage will Jordan still love Amanda. Cannot see how you write this one out.

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