[Report This]Date: May 07 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the little backstory, I hope that we see more revenge for Kate.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like the story but seeing how Kate acting I'm beginning to feel Nat was in the right and deserved to stay big.
Author's Response:
It looks like my work here is finished :P. But really, that,s what I'm trying to squeeze out of this thing. Sympathy, pity, etc. I want you guys to read a chapter and it feel right or wrong in terms of what should happen in the story instead of how I should fix my GUMS.
Chapter 5 won't be what you expect but it'll ease your troubled conscience a little.
Date: May 06 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm...
That was pretty good for fleshing out the character's backstories a bit more. Or at the very least, Katie's...
Considering that Katie apparently doesn't live with her sister and is now the bigger of the two I'm going to guess she's gonna take her new little sister along with her to her home-away from home yeah? ^_^;
After swiping any convenient wadds of cash lying about the house first of course ;)
Author's Response:
Who knows what'll happen now that the tables are turned and the situation in another's favor? Kate could possibly NOT be the cold-hearted bitch everyone's making her out to be. I guess you'll just have to wait until chapter 5.