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Reviewer: prophetofgreed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2013 3:31 AM Title: Steven's birthday pt. 2

I like your story :)

And I hope that Steven goes with Mandi. I want to see that relationship prosper even if their *marriage* is arranged. 

Though I'm confused by the sizes. Are the girls 20 feet and men 5 inches tall? Cause that is a huge size difference. 

Also, an interaction between Steven and his father would've been nice. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.To answer your question i've noted the size difference at 20 feet for women and 5 inches for men is the averages.I have been pruposely ambigous about the character's size so that the reader can insert those details for themselves. Steven could be a little bigger or smaller and that goes for the other characters as well.I haven't had any interaction with the father because there's a backstory I haven't revealed yet.

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