Reviewer: Chozo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2013 7:26 PM Title: The Ex-SuperSized

Glad to see you continuing this after more than a month hiatus. One thing I remember reading in the earlier chapters is you mentioned that since Lucy and Henry are biologically related to Jenni it meant that they are strengthened by being on her body somehow. So I am wondering since that is the case, what does it mean when she shrinks people who are not her biological offspring and turns them into her parasitic slaves? Does this mean that since they aren't biologically related that being on her body has the opposite effect and weakens them somehow? Maybe what this could mean is that Henry and Lucy are nurtured and able to grow back to normal, but the others are not. Or maybe they even get shrunk further? I don't want to see them be killed or shrunk into oblivion because that would end the fun, but since they are not Jenni's kin you would think this would have some negative effect on them in some way.

Author's Response:

That storyline will be addressed shortly,but I felt the need to address all of Jennie's personal issues first. Depending on which way it goes Diane could play a bigger part in the future or be written off soon. I felt that there needed to be closure with Jenni's ex so all of her personal demons could be excercised.