Date: February 25 2013 5:12 PM Title: Henry's night out with mommy
If I may make a suggestion, since Jenni is jealous of the girl her son has a crush on, how about she track down this slut and use a vial on her and reduce her into a parasite on her body just like she did with her children? Except in her case since she hates her for stealing her son away from her, have Jenni be cruel to her, and make the shrinking permanent.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion,im not sure if or how to introduce more characters.This was originally slated to be a 5 chapter story,but as I was thinking of a way to wrap it up my mind went blank. Im going to try and resume this story in the next couple of weeks,and the next chapter will be a good sign of where it's headed.
Date: February 22 2013 2:01 AM Title: Henry's night out with mommy
Very promising setup with the nipple placement. Hopefully Henry'll be stuck there for a bit and have his sister join him before escaping: there's definitely not enough mixed gender sibling shrinking around giant mother stories, and even less with decent breast scenes. Liking the story so far, and looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Don't worry about me rushing Henry out of his current canyon,there will be plenty more from this when I pick it back up.