[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 9:12 PM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
No! He can't leave Wendy this early! Oh well, guess I'll have to wait...
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 9:49 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Me thinks Wendy is now my favorite character.
Author's Response:
ME, 2, Dudeman!
[Report This]Date: February 22 2013 4:33 PM Title: Ch.17 reverse slam
Woah,woah woah woah woah wait...
WHAT?????????????????????????
What the fuck just happened?!?1?!
Author's Response:
That's What Tom Said!!!
Date: February 22 2013 7:01 AM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
You should try these free alternatives to Word Pad: Libre Office or Open Office. You can download them from their respective websites and donations are purely optional. Both come with a word processor, amoungst other things.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Stubby, I'll check into that, I'm kinda 'habitual', with the 'Wordpad', and I hate to switch programs right in the middle of a story...
Date: February 21 2013 5:15 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Excellent story. Not a fan of the switch-back chapter which killed the vibe from the previous chapter for me (kinda hoping it's a dream sequence like jacksmith does lol), but it's your perogative. I am definitely a fan of Wendy as his giantess. Not a fan of Sarah or a "happy" ending...
Author's Response:
Thanks, Just trying to keep it interesting, and exploring some different venue's....
Stay tuned, the 'decrement' continues.....
Date: February 21 2013 7:41 AM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
That was good. Wendy got what she deserved.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Stubby, I havn't figuered out why the blank space, I think it has something to do with (Wordpad) I have to figure out how to remove it when I'm ready to post....
[Report This]Date: February 21 2013 12:01 AM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
WHAT!?! Why, why would you do that! lol, ugh, another thing I hate along with unaware stories is when the little guy gets revenge! Tinies are meant to suffer at the feet of big powerful women :) And now Sarah is coming with more powder *sigh* don't think I am going to like where this is going. That said, still a great story and you should never allow myself or any reviewers to sway your stories, stick to your plan, the fact that your stories can move people to care about the outcome is a testament to your story telling.
Oh, and licking a guys feet? Really? That's gross! ;)
Author's Response:
Hang in there man, There'l be some wild twists and turns in this one! I do have somewhat of a general story-line. But, it's kinda cool to drift around and try to touch on a little bit of everything,.. Maybe Weny will realize that she has a foot fetish?
Date: February 20 2013 11:44 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Finally some justice for Tom! As much as I like giantesses it makes me feel good that he's getting a bit of revenge, hope he doesn't take it too far though, I think hes better than that.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2013 11:42 PM Title: Ch.15 The Morning After
I just love Wendy! Love the way she got him off! I hope he ends up with her, either as her slave for life or she snuffs him out, it should be her who gets him!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2013 11:32 PM Title: Ch. 14 The Pool Party
Loved how Wendy got him high! Great idea, just another example of how helpless he is and that they can do anything they want to him. The only down side to that for me is he was in too much of a haze and not fully aware what was going on, reminds me of the unaware theme some stories have and I HATE unaware stories, I think it's so much better when both parties know exactly what is going on. Good stuff with Twilla though, one down and several pool hunnies to go!
Date: February 20 2013 9:43 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Ok, maybe not 'death' but I am definitely leaning toward the entrapment aspect. Don't know why, but I suddenly like it.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2013 9:42 PM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
I see you made Tom a more dynamic character. And nice plot twist. Also, the infamous white space attacks again, this time becoming even larger!
Author's Response:
The white space increases more each chapter? I think I'm 'shrinking" man!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 9:32 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Strangely, I'm starting to lean more to the, "death" or "life enslavement" aspect for this story more. Maybe all the new stories about domineering giantesses are rubbing off on me. Oh nooo!!
Author's Response:
Death aspet???
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 4:31 PM Title: Ch.15 The Morning After
Uh oh, I don't think Tom's gonna last too long now... Tom, why did you sell yourself?
Author's Response:
Now, he's getting 'rented-out' oh, noooooo........
Date: February 19 2013 3:57 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Wildcat I have to say that if I had one criticism of this story it's that Tom is beginning to feel less and less like a character and more like a camera for us to go from set-piece to sexy set-piece. He really hasn't said a word since he sold himself, and even before that he never really said anything cept for the beginning. It didn't bug me in your previous stories because you had several tiny characters intead of the one...I guess when its just one tiny character I feel like he should have more thoughts than, "im horny" or "this is so humiliating" or "this hurts" which is pretty much Tom's range of thoughts cept for the first chapter and the selling to linda chapter.
Author's Response:
Hmmm, well, let's think about this for just a moment,.........No one 'Listens" to him anyway! Except for Sarah, and well she's trying to get him back, hopefully!
Date: February 19 2013 3:44 PM Title: Ch.15 The Morning After
Can I ask why there is so much blank space? There is spacing between the first few lines in the chapter, (title, number and author) which is fine, but at the end of this one there seems to a huge pointless space which isn't usually there.
Author's Response:
When your shrunk, everything seems so much bigger, doesn't it?
[Report This]Date: February 18 2013 1:51 PM Title: Ch. 14 The Pool Party
Ahh, whatever female you choose, it's bound to be a wild ride.
Author's Response:
Why, Thank-you, kind sir....
Date: February 17 2013 2:32 PM Title: Ch. 14 The Pool Party
You mention the name Twila (which I think might be spelt Twyla) before actually introducing her as a character. When he first hears her he won't know who it is. It was a good chapter although there seems to be too much reliance on time skips. How about some description to link the various parts together?
Author's Response:
No, It's TWILA, (Affectionatly called= "Tweaker"), and when Tom was inside of the cage,(with the sheet over it, he could hear them outside talking)that's how he knew who it was. But, your right, there is a time skip, where Tom is in the house, before the lady guests arrive, and Wendy takes the cage out to the patio, but that, is the only time-skip....
Unless, your referring to his 'drug-induced' 'HAZE', but that, kind-of, speaks for itself.....
[Report This]Date: February 16 2013 11:30 PM Title: Ch.13 Linda's Book Club
Nice twist! I didn't see that coming, sold for 200 G's! Phew, lot of dough. I'd imagine that would buy him security, at least from Linda, I'm sure she wouldn't want to throw that kind of money away by snuffing out her little man, can't say the same for her pool sluts or goth daughter! Great story you are spinning here.
Author's Response:
Tom is swimmin with the be-oche's, NOW! Ha!) (Hopefully, not the fishe's!) Thanks for reviewin' Max!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2013 8:25 PM Title: Ch.13 Linda's Book Club
Tom, what have you done? You were stolen, but now you might be permanently gone! What is Sara to do now that Tom is in a situation where he might be killed?
Excelent Capitulo! Excellent Chapter!
Author's Response:
Tom was just looking out for Sarah. But, will it turn out to be the biggest mistake of his diminuative life? The erotic adventure continues, as Tom drifts from realality to nightmare.....
Thanks for viewin' Dude!