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Reviewer: kol868 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Please please finish this its soooo good

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

Please continue this, I love it! Living in a city protected by 10000 foot high goddesses is a dream come true for me.



Author's Response:

Probably won't be updated for a while, sorry. :(

But, that doesn't mean it won't!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

I really liked the interview segment. I like the rock climbing idea too.

Although allowing the people to choose their own rooms seems like a very disorganized way of doing things. And what if there aren't enough rooms left? Then what? Can they communicate with there keepers?



Author's Response:

Accidentally deleted one of your review questions sorry! About that though they were re-enlarged because not all the people on the plane were going to the micro-city. I don't think I made that clear enough. Yeah, for the room plot you found a plot hole.

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